After feedback from Phil, I decided to return to my renders, those focused on using script and failed renders as a way of texturizing a model, in an attempt to push the idea of them continuing to exist in a 3D space, searching for a way of combining the ideas of substance and surface into one rendered product.
just in terms of legibility and depth perception etc... these are still reading as 'murky' or rather a bit purposeless - not a judgement on the trajectory of your 'research', but a judgement on my ability to 'read' these images 'as' images... For me, one of the weaknesses of your Adaptation B film was the way all the layering and greying basically flattened your imagery - so the 3D factor (the materiality factor) was lost, leaving us with a sort of 'white noise'. I think there's a bit of that happening here for the viewer of your work. To me, the 'beauty' isn't available, because the image plane is flat.
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